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Wednesday, June 8th, 2005
11:44p - I Revised a Story!
So, here's the revision. I cleaned up some minor things, changed the ending... hopefully it's a little less opaque now.

The Fourth Purpose -- RevisedCollapse )

[Still more spellcheck hilarity: Livejournal doesn't allow "Livejournal" or contractions, but it gave "Yoda" as a suggested alternative -- to "you".]

Edit: "The Fourth Profession" is a story by Larry Niven. I wrote "The Fourth Purpose." Changes above reflect this.

current mood: accomplished

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